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*[[Shell]] would benefit from a general edit, formattign and references need wikified
 
*[[Shell]] would benefit from a general edit, formattign and references need wikified
 
*[[Royal Parks]] would benefit from some background or an intro. references needed too
 
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===tone and language need attention===
 
===tone and language need attention===

Revision as of 19:30, 14 September 2007

Pages that need checking and editing

Fact checking and referencing needed

need editing/rewriting

tone and language need attention

  • Barney Jones deleted as was pointless bitching IMO Phil Chandler 12:01, 22 Jun 2007 (BST) - restored previous edit and edited for tone and referencing, --David 22:42, 25 Jul 2007 (BST)
  • Baroness Chalker of Wallasey edited for questionable laguage - prop. needs fact checking Phil Chandler 12:03, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)
  • Emma Gilpin Much stuff about TIME mag removed as it belongs elsewhere. Edited for potential libel. Phil Chandler 12:04, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)
  • Finsbury can we say "Stephen Liar Byres" ? (No we can't and now we don't. Phil Chandler 12:05, 22 Jun 2007 (BST) - Er, well, yes we can since it is in a passage quoted from Private Eye --David 22:23, 25 Jul 2007 (BST)

referencing needs attention

formatting needed

Needs wikified