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*[[Barney Jones]] deleted as was pointless bitching IMO [[User:Phil Chandler|Phil Chandler]] 12:01, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)
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*[[Barney Jones]] deleted as was pointless bitching IMO [[User:Phil Chandler|Phil Chandler]] 12:01, 22 Jun 2007 (BST) - restored previous edit and edited for tone and referencing, --[[User:David|David]] 22:42, 25 Jul 2007 (BST)
 
*[[Baroness Chalker of Wallasey]] edited for questionable laguage - prop. needs fact checking [[User:Phil Chandler|Phil Chandler]] 12:03, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)
 
*[[Baroness Chalker of Wallasey]] edited for questionable laguage - prop. needs fact checking [[User:Phil Chandler|Phil Chandler]] 12:03, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)
 
*[[Emma Gilpin]] Much stuff about TIME mag removed as it belongs elsewhere. Edited for potential libel. [[User:Phil Chandler|Phil Chandler]] 12:04, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)  
 
*[[Emma Gilpin]] Much stuff about TIME mag removed as it belongs elsewhere. Edited for potential libel. [[User:Phil Chandler|Phil Chandler]] 12:04, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)  

Revision as of 21:42, 25 July 2007

Pages that need checking and editing

Fact checking and referencing needed

need editing/rewriting

tone and language need attention

  • Barney Jones deleted as was pointless bitching IMO Phil Chandler 12:01, 22 Jun 2007 (BST) - restored previous edit and edited for tone and referencing, --David 22:42, 25 Jul 2007 (BST)
  • Baroness Chalker of Wallasey edited for questionable laguage - prop. needs fact checking Phil Chandler 12:03, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)
  • Emma Gilpin Much stuff about TIME mag removed as it belongs elsewhere. Edited for potential libel. Phil Chandler 12:04, 22 Jun 2007 (BST)
  • Finsbury can we say "Stephen Liar Byres" ? (No we can't and now we don't. Phil Chandler 12:05, 22 Jun 2007 (BST) - Er, well, yes we can since it is in a passage quoted from Private Eye --David 22:23, 25 Jul 2007 (BST)

referencing needs attention

formatting needed

Needs wikified