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more to come on this and the rest of them _ thought the stuff on Byrne very poooooor
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this has been badly editted —again — for instance even the opening line has been carelessly altered
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Colin Byrne is CEO, Weber Shandwick UK and Ireland. He was Chief Press Officer of the Labour Party in 1988, but Byrne has hung around the party and — this has come to typify New Labour — even when in 1996 he became a Director of Shandwick Consultants was also an ‘Election Consultant’ with the Labour Party. He worked for Labour’s election manager, and former flatmate, Peter Mandelson, on a number of strategic projects connected with Labour’s press campaign for the general election. Condemned to spend four years travelling the world with The Prince of Wales helping organise parts of HRH’s overseas PR programmes, managing international media teams to promote HRH’s interests in business and sustainable profit taking.
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Colin Byrne is CEO, Weber Shandwick UK and Ireland. He was Chief Press Officer of the Labour Party in 1988. '''Even when in 1996 he became a Director of Shandwick Consultants was also an ‘Election Consultant’ with the Labour Party.'''
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He worked for Labour’s election manager, and former flatmate, Peter Mandelson, on a number of strategic projects connected with Labour’s press campaign for the general election. He also worked for The Prince of Wales helping organise his overseas PR programmes for four years.
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The line in bold there dosn't make sense — why fuck up someone's writing like this?  Answers please... It just makes the whole thing look inarticulate right from the start and misses the point of what i was saying — I can't even be bothered going through the rest of it.

Revision as of 14:00, 15 September 2006

this has been badly editted —again — for instance even the opening line has been carelessly altered


Colin Byrne is CEO, Weber Shandwick UK and Ireland. He was Chief Press Officer of the Labour Party in 1988, but Byrne has hung around the party and — this has come to typify New Labour — even when in 1996 he became a Director of Shandwick Consultants was also an ‘Election Consultant’ with the Labour Party. He worked for Labour’s election manager, and former flatmate, Peter Mandelson, on a number of strategic projects connected with Labour’s press campaign for the general election. Condemned to spend four years travelling the world with The Prince of Wales helping organise parts of HRH’s overseas PR programmes, managing international media teams to promote HRH’s interests in business and sustainable profit taking.

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Colin Byrne is CEO, Weber Shandwick UK and Ireland. He was Chief Press Officer of the Labour Party in 1988. Even when in 1996 he became a Director of Shandwick Consultants was also an ‘Election Consultant’ with the Labour Party. He worked for Labour’s election manager, and former flatmate, Peter Mandelson, on a number of strategic projects connected with Labour’s press campaign for the general election. He also worked for The Prince of Wales helping organise his overseas PR programmes for four years.

The line in bold there dosn't make sense — why fuck up someone's writing like this? Answers please... It just makes the whole thing look inarticulate right from the start and misses the point of what i was saying — I can't even be bothered going through the rest of it.