Difference between revisions of "User talk:Lynn Hill"

Revision as of 10:41, 30 November 2007

might be useful: A Guide to Referencing don't forget to go here and enter a brief bio: http://www.spinprofiles.org/index.php?title=User:Lynn_Hill&action=edit --David 11:58, 18 September 2007 (BST)

Hi Lynn,

no need to add external links if they just give more info aboout the person. the key thing is to look at the text and see if

it needs rewritten
to see if there is anything obvious about the person which is missing.
to add a summary at the top if needed 9egt on Ancona you might add that he is both a journalist and a neoliberal think tank networker)
in these cases to think about them in relation to editorial intelligence as this is an organisation (in my view) which is there to abolish the distinction between pr and journalism. So, eg Ancona is both a hack and think tanker meaning he has a conflict of interest and also that he is both pushing a view and reporting views.

Make sense?

--David 13:00, 6 October 2007 (BST)

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 --[[User:David|David]] 13:00, 6 October 2007 (BST)
-Hi,
+*[[Obesity All Party Parliamentary Group]]
+*[[National Obesity Forum]] both supported by [[Slim Fast Foods]]
-If only using one name for eht person use their surname and noot their first name...
+--[[User:David|David]] 10:41, 30 November 2007 (GMT)
---[[User:David|David]] 14:53, 7 October 2007 (BST)