User talk:George Mcgill

Hi,

are you unsure about what you are doing? You seem to be posting material and then deleting it?

--David 13:28, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

Hi I'm having a wee bit of trouble. The bits I have added have resulted in the rest of the page ending up in the references So I have been trying to resolve this

The answer is yes I am unsure about what I am doing - but I'll keep tying G

just put the material back

and then we can have a look and see what - if anything - is wrong. And then we can give guidance on what to do. --David 15:53, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

OK

For example see AEF page

G

Hi David

I have resolved it. I was missing out the "/" in the "</ref>" at the end of the reference DOH!!

G

Advertising and children in Advertising Education Forum

HI George

in

http://www.spinprofiles.org/index.php/Advertising_Education_Forum

can u make clear from the beginning where the info on advertising and children comes from? there are a lot of older articles in spin that don't but we are trying to standardise the newer material so it's clearer.

so for example, begin this section where the info comes from Beder's book with something like,

Sharon Beder, in her book Blah Blah, comments on the effects of advertising on children as follows:

and then launch into the detail. this enables reader to know how where the info is coming from.

many thanks

--Claire Robinson 12:31, 10 March 2010 (UTC)