Difference between revisions of "Talk:World Media Association"
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Revision as of 16:39, 28 September 2008
Para The World Media Association (WMA)...--
replace "flunkies" with a more precise term. As a general observation, regardless of the (dis)respect in which we hold this org, we need as far as poss to make the facts speak for themselves. When we've shown the reader thru evidence what the org is like, and he is ready to make his judgment, then we can come in with one of our own.
Amb. Phillip Sanchez-- what is Amb.?
On the WMA website Phillip Sanchez, on the quotes from one of Moon's advertisements:--
confusing grammar; rewrite
That actually gets more crazier, because you see--
omit--what follows is quite crazy enough for us to get the point. It's a matter of show, don't tell.
