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− | The main sponsors of these vigilantes were --
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− | do you have a source for the fact that these orgs were sponsors? Pls include a ref to this source.
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− | competing conspiracy theories --
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− | can you be more accurate? do you need this phrase? I find it confusing as there is the question of which/whose conspiracy theories these are; "conspiracy theories" is one of those phrases like "terrorist" that needs to be understood in context.
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− | Ilana Freedman is Managing Partner of GGI. Other partners include Lt. Colonel Gordon Cucullu, Intelligence Director with GGI (and Benador). --
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− | I've edited this sentences as a hanging "others" was unclear. Is it correct -- is the lt colonel a partner?
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− | It would be interesting to compare his opinion of the guilt of Saddam Hussein (as head of state and thus guilty) to Pinochet (as head of state and thus not guilty). --
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− | I do not understand this so have deleted it, but if you want to clarify it, pls reinstate.
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− | In general, it's really good.
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− | [[User:Claire|Claire]]
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− | I seen old Shrimpo on Sky news' round up of the press and thought I'd have a go — you'll prob. want to section off the summit stuff but i thought I'd keep going with it and bang down as much as poss while I'm in the mood: feel free to monkey around with it - its all a first draft as such
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− | Looks good. REmember that links to new pages need [[link]] and not [link] which seems to affect thispage strangely?
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− | --[[User:David|David]] 14:04, 5 December 2007 (GMT)
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