User talk:Tommy

Have a look at the pages on Scottish and Universal Investments and those linked to them. I think a wee bit of adding to the complex of Fraser related businesses would be useful.

What do you think?

--David 14:11, 9 Nov 2006 (GMT)

Can you explain the 'all over theworld' ref and who awarded him the resources or prize to do it and where he did it...? --David 16:06, 15 Nov 2006 (GMT)

Tommy, that's better. Still a little light on evidence and a few remaining assertive words which could be softened?? 'Shadowy networks' can you remove that phrase and substantiate the links? What other groups is it linked to? What arethe connections of the principals. Where is the Stockholm Network in all this? Let the evidence do the talking... --David 13:28, 6 October 2007 (BST)

'depleted' advisory board suggests it was bigger in the past? is this true? or do you mean 'small' advisory board?

Also re-read the last sentence: doesn't read well. Remove last of?

--David 14:52, 7 October 2007 (BST)

I suggest that 'of which Nurses for Reform is a member.' is always better.... --David 15:06, 7 October 2007 (BST)

also can you use the new reference format?

eg 'quote'

then at bottom of page

Notes

--David 15:08, 7 October 2007 (BST)

To add category links to the Water page you need to:

• create the categories by going to the relevant profiles and adding [[Category:title of category]] at the bottom.
• click on the category link and add a brief text describing the category and save
• Then highlight and copy the url and paste it on the water page eg [http://www.spinprofiles.org/index.php/Category:Water Water]

ok? --David 17:27, 20 February 2008 (UTC)