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many thanks
 
--[[User:Claire Robinson|Claire Robinson]] 12:27, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
 
--[[User:Claire Robinson|Claire Robinson]] 12:27, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
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== Truth on the Rocks ==
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HI Steven
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are we allowed to tweak this page for clarity? i hope so as it's a bit confusing as it stands. can we introduce the list of headlines or whatever they are, beginning "Spot the Difference", with an explanation of what they are? Quotes from news reports about the event? if so, we should say so.
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also the formatting is unclear. we need para breaks and subheads would help clarity. also we need to get rid of superfluous stuff like the end of this:
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:3.30pm — Geoffrey Howe says no bomb found and that the three February 1989MAGILL9
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also what does this mean?
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:(7.3.88 also quoted in What the Papers Say C4 12.3.88)
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this may be a work in prog -- hope so! i can imagine it's much clearer in a printed version as formatting may clarify.
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many thanks
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--[[User:Claire Robinson|Claire Robinson]] 18:48, 29 October 2009 (UTC)

Revision as of 18:48, 29 October 2009

To Do

Done

Newspapers/Magazines/News Outlets to be created

Daily Sport | Sunday Sport | The Spectator | Fortune | Time | Newsweek | Financial Times | The Scotsman | The Herald | CNN | Daily Express | The Daily Mirror | The People | Daily Record | Sunday Post | Sunday Mail | Daily Mail and General Trust | ITN | The Barclay Brothers | Channel 4 | Channel 5 | The Independent | The Independent on Sunday | The Observer | The Guardian | Haartez | Ma’ariv

News Owners

Daily Mail and General Trust | Guardian Media Group | Hachette Filipacchi | Newsquest plc | Scottish Media Group

Media Links

World Economic Forum | Trilateral Commission | Bilderberg Group (the Economist provided the secretariat in 2008) |LOTIS Committee

category

HI Steve

don't forget to add category to Dominik Henry -- and to any other new pages. I'm sure you know about the existing categories page at http://www.spinprofiles.org/index.php?title=Special:Categories&limit=500

thanks

--Claire Robinson 12:05, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

category for this chap too

also Peter Roberts

thanks

--Claire Robinson 12:07, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

Sentence in Scottish Coal Company

Hi Steve

can u just go in and fix the grammar of this sentence so meaning clear? suspect it was written in haste...

Scottish Coal deny the allegations made by Steenis kick-started a successful legal action in Corby, where a decommissioned steel works was blamed for local birth defects[6].

http://www.spinprofiles.org/index.php/Scottish_Coal_Company

many thanks --Claire Robinson 12:27, 20 October 2009 (UTC)

Truth on the Rocks

HI Steven

are we allowed to tweak this page for clarity? i hope so as it's a bit confusing as it stands. can we introduce the list of headlines or whatever they are, beginning "Spot the Difference", with an explanation of what they are? Quotes from news reports about the event? if so, we should say so.

also the formatting is unclear. we need para breaks and subheads would help clarity. also we need to get rid of superfluous stuff like the end of this:

3.30pm — Geoffrey Howe says no bomb found and that the three February 1989MAGILL9

also what does this mean?

(7.3.88 also quoted in What the Papers Say C4 12.3.88)

this may be a work in prog -- hope so! i can imagine it's much clearer in a printed version as formatting may clarify.

many thanks --Claire Robinson 18:48, 29 October 2009 (UTC)