User talk:Kieron Higgins

Hi,.

I have sorted the ref format. Make sure you also add in the full title and details for each ref. A URL is not enough.

See: SpinProfiles:A Guide to Referencing

Best

--David 13:41, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Feedback

Kieron,

I think you are progressing well with this project, but you now need to get a lot more material up on the site. In particular you could/should:

1. I have pasted below the names of the pstaff in the DGMC To download the white book go here: http://www.coi.gov.uk/twb and enter twb and password ascertain this will give you the names of the people in the Directorate General Media and Communications
2. Add summaries of the contents of the documents. There is - I suspect - quite a lot of good material in here to fillet and also - I suggest you make jpg files of the graphs and add them to the page.
3. start to write an account of the Mod experience with blogs etc up until the emergence of the strate4gy.
4. write to those uinofficial blogs/Soldier sites and ask about their views and experience of the strategy/contact with MoD?
5. use lexis to summarise developments in Mod Pr in the last 5 years.

Let me know if you have any queries.

--David 14:12, 3 April 2009 (UTC)